I haven't done this in awhile, and it feels so good to get back into it. You know the rules, 100 words about a picture of someone elses choosing. Here is the picture, and here is my 100 words.
The creaking wood sounded much louder than it should in the
empty room. Sasha felt her heart beat
double in her chest, a tiny bird trapped inside the cage of her ribs. He
motioned for her, and she obeyed. Dropping to her knees she crossed the
polished floor and crawled to him, always so ready to serve.
“You will give me what I want, yes?” Klein’s accent was
heavy, Germanic.
“Yes.” It was always yes. She held the ropey flesh of his
cock aside, and pressed her fangs into his inner thigh.
A blood soaked tear rolled from swollen eyes.
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a tiny bird trapped inside the cage of her ribs<--nice. I can sense so much more than what you've written, really cool.
ReplyDeleteOuch!But l did enjoy this post, very atmospheric!
ReplyDeleteThis was scary erotic, frightfully good. I loved the "tiny bird" line as well. Very artful and descriptive. Fabulous:) xo
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I love the way it ended. Anything dealing with fangs in flesh is right up my alley. ;o)
ReplyDeleteI love the way you write. sexy and thrilling.
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