Anyhow, I digress. I could speak about all manners of beasties and critters forever, telling scary stories and what-not, but why get into all that, when today a picture is worth a hundred words (like my segue?)
“I’ll love you forever,” Bill looked into
her eyes and smiled. “No matter what, I’ll be with you on our wedding day.” Blood
spilled from the corner of his mouth. If he said anything else Rachel couldn’t
hear him. The wail of incoming sirens drowned out the world, the flashing
strobes painting the night.
Ten years later, and Rachel still
remembered that promise. Her new fiancé waited outside, along with a hundred
friends and family members. They waited for her, but she waited for someone
else.
In the distance, just inside the shadows
of the woods, Bill lurched ever closer.
As always, there are others out there enjoying the fun of writing 100 words from the very same picture. I am sure they are VERY different from mine, but I figured since this is October, I should head to my roots and go with something a little spooky, a liitle different.
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Oooh I have shivers running down me now. I started off sad. There is a lot more to this one I sense. Great flash
ReplyDeletedun dun dun... what is he going to do when he arrives? Eat the groom? Great flash
ReplyDeleteThat was entirely creepy, I loved it. All the questions are entirely intriguing. I agree with Naomi, there is a lot more here. Bills there, but what is he going to do? I want to know!! Fab flash.
ReplyDeleteThis gave me chills and goosebumps in a great way. At first I thought it was vampire related but then when the sirens came in, I thought omg. Will she marry or forever want to be with Bill? Will she move on after 10 years? I'm hooked. I want to know what may happen for these three. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat took him so long! And will she still want him when she sees him? Lurching has an ominous sound. Hope he doesn't want to kill her and take her with him. Definately creepy. Loved it!
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