And since this is such a hallowed day I thought it fitting to provide something... unusual for you all to read for this weeks FFF. I hope you enjoy.
Eyes closed underneath the blindfold, he was moved into place.
Just a few more seconds and he would finally get to see her. His heart
thundered inside his chest, palms cool and clammy.
It wasn’t the obscene
amount of money he spent that made him nervous; it was the relevance of this
moment. It seemed like everything led right to this moment.
“Are you ready to see her?” The artist asked, his voice
betraying the excitement that coursed through his body.
“Yes, please.”
The blindfold was removed and he saw her.
“She is perfect,” he gasped. “She still looks alive…”
Oh wow! Such tension, apprehension and a final surprise. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteStill looks alive? Did he have her stuffed? Interesting flash. I liked the twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteChristan, you never fail to surprise me. I can't decide whether to laugh, or shake my head at you. Such a different perspective. Well written though. Kudos on the jaw dropping spin.
ReplyDeleteoh man! she still looks alive. what? I so didn't see that coming. I was taken in by his thoughts and than bam
ReplyDeleteso interesting! cool flash
What a deliciously twisted mind you have and the finish was indeed, jaw-dropping. I was stunned, resembling the almost dead dead. Wonderful, Christian:) xo
ReplyDeleteWow absolutely amazing. Your mind is disturbing and twisted,,, there's nothing wrong with that. Your writing just keeps getting better and better ;)
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