Angelo reached out to remove one of the leaves from Dabe's hair, but coulnd't bring himself to do it. The yellow looked so bold in the darkness, a perfect contrast of emotions.
"You know he is going to find us, right?" Dave looked up, his dark eyes reflecting the cobalt blue sky. There was so much worry in them that Angelo nearly wept.
"He can't hurt us anymore." Angelo slid his fingers down the tight skin of Dave's belly. He's dead now." His hand slipped under the denim and found the raging heat of Dave's erection.
"That's what worries me."
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Ah!! too bad there're only 100 words...I would love to hear what's happening after :)
ReplyDeleteGreat post for a first. Welcome to the FFF
WOW, that was amazing. Totally hot! Great FFF!
ReplyDeleteGreat flasher! You could take this further. Well done!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written! This definitely leaves you wanting more. Great job! ^_^
ReplyDeleteOur little virgin - yummy and glad you're here!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, loved the last line! Welcome to the group!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the group! Very visual FFF, loved the last line. Intriguing. Is he a zombie? Vampire? Love it. I write paranormal as well.
ReplyDeleteChris, welcome and well done, I love anything paranormal. You are no longer a FFF virgin. Did it hurt?
ReplyDeleteExcellent post! Very well done for your first one. You're going to fit in just fine.
ReplyDeleteWell Done, Chris. Welcome to the group. That was excellent!
ReplyDeleteWelcome in! Wonderful FFF!
ReplyDeleteWelcome Chris. Love this one...shivers! although I wanted to laugh at the "that's what worries" me...dead used to mean dead...lol.
ReplyDeleteWell done and Welcome Christian!
ReplyDeleteMy felicitations and greetings, new one. LOL. Okay. this was good, darkly erotic and suspensful. I appreciated the peek. my own writing is more HEA or at least HFN, but don't hold it against me, okay? Hope you Flash us again. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteOh no. Who's after then that he fears even in death? Nice FFF.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the group. I loved your take on the picture and I need to find out more.lol This is an awesome group of people and the variety of stories is great to see.
ReplyDeleteWelcome! This is an excellent post!
ReplyDeleteWelcome! Great post! Mmmm yumm
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